After getting complaints, I could not express myself with a few words and the request to express the experiences of the pilgrimage more tight, I remembered about my journey's diary. In it I kept records of the day in something fixed, short and tight, yet powerful in expressing thoughts and feelings.
俳句 Haiku
1日
青春24
電車に乗り換え
一日間
2日
衣服高い
お接待楽しい
新年御来光
3日
不眠の夜
古い温泉静養
道の裏
4日
遍路初め
仏の下から
遠い展望
5日
冬の登山
覆い隠して
天国到着
6日
どこにもない
山の血道まで
勇猛な予定
7日
頑張ってのに
外で寝られない
仏の天使
8日
不眠が2倍
故郷へ行き先
月光ながら
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Day 1
24 the spring of life
switching from train to train
one day long
Day 2
expensive clothes
and wonderful gifts
the new year's first sunlight
Day 3
a night without sleep
relax in the old onsen
behind the streets
Day 4
the pilgrimage begins
from below the Buddha
you can see very far
Day 5
the climbing of mountains in winter
completely covered and hidden
the arrival at paradise
Day 6
from out of nowhere
to the vein of the mountains
a daring plan
Day 7
despite the greatest efforts
you cannot sleep outside
Buddhist angels
Day 8
the lack of sleep doubled
destination: home
going under moonlight
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2 comments:
:) Very good! How about writing a Haiku summary as part of every one of your coming posts?
Leslie
Good idea, but I think I keep them up for special occasions :)
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